I wrote out an outline for my story, but I like to ask your opinions please, if you can?

Its starts with the Julian Republic, a country that use to be the evangelical USA; after the movement of the New Atheist and New Age movement (which resulted to a 20 year cold war between fundamental theism and militant atheism), a yuppie and patriarchal organized committee planned the ination of the pope, president and several leaders, and a new order was seated in the Senate. The Julian party claimed in its philosophy that the ancient times were better and livelier until the spreading of the Christian faith, and soon all the churches, synagogues, mosques and atheistic buildings were shut down and locked. Now the country had humanistic lives and still believe in gods but with human flaws like Zeus and Jupiter, thus the Ancient Pantheons and virtues were brought to life again. And women were being treated as they were in ancient history, not harshly but slightly inferior, and there was a new law stating that no woman was to remain celibate or a virgin beyond 30, according to the Hippocratic medicine; prolong virginity causes sickness. The Republic also consists a hierarchy; senators, polytheistic priests, upper cles, middle cles, lower cles, life-long domestic servants, laborers, country folk and prostitutes. One boy and girl were taken into separate institutions to train as concubines and soldiers. As they grow older, they seem likely to enjoy their social status. But apart from all the banquets and parties, the bloody animal hunts, the sacrificing to the many gods, the arousing orgies, the old philosophies, the living life for short and happy, the adulterous affairs, the lust and pleasures, the profligacy, the hedonistic carefree ancient lifestyles, they start to wonder would the world be better if all or any of the Abrahamic faiths never existed.